“keep my head above the water”
said my heart
but my mind said “no”
you can swim and find a log said my heart
“no, you would drown of fatigue finding one” said my mind
i dipped my head to see what is beneath
in a cloggy vision
i saw little fishes swimming around
the green plants trying to grab my feet
my mind said “see that fish, you are its dinner”
“No” said my heart ‘you are to eat your dinner home”
Da...nice poem....why are you not writing any peoms now????????????????/
ReplyDeleteDa...I reread this poem today and it is fantastic....but the latest one looks like a big drawn out...poems look best when they are short and to the point....
ReplyDeleteMy poetry blog is: wildhaiku.blogspot.com
What about doing a guest post in each others blog?
okay we can do that. :)
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